I feel confident about this draft, mostly because I put a lot of work into it and I think its well structured. I'm a bit concerned about how my paper is written overall, I'm not the best at following guidelines, so I'm kind of afraid I wrote it completely wrong and I'm going to get a bad grade (being honest). The easiest part was coming up with my argument, I felt very strongly about my topic so it wasn't hard to get the initial work done. The hardest part was researching, even though our class has been doing projects like this every year, I think we can all agree that the details are still fuzzy. I mean every year it gets more and more complicated and we haven't had time to adjust to even the smallest details, let alone tackle huge portions each week.
I feel like changing my information, my sources aren't present in each paragraph so I would like to change that and make my researched information more available. I would like help changing that, as I said earlier I'm not very skilled at following English guidelines, because there are always a lot of grey areas. I would like you to focus on my order of paragraphs and strength of my argument, or how it was written.
Total time:
The fault in our stars : 1 hour
Paper : 4 hours writing and editing
Abby, you need to come see me to talk about this.
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